Today we will check your rough draft of your song.
You will take out a fresh sheet of paper and begin to rework your rough draft into the first final rough draft. This draft should look more like a song with separate stanzas, a chorus perhaps, and lyrical writing. This paper will be attached to the top of the work you completed for today. We will want to see all drafts together.
Changes you should consider include adding strong verbs, concrete nouns, and hardworking adjectives. Imagery is what makes poetry work-make sure you have used it.
Discussion regarding tone. Beat should begin to be considered. Here are some canned choices. As you listen, consider if the beat matches the message you are sending in your song.
Homework: Complete first final rough draft and have that in class with you tomorrow.
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